Tuesday, 8 January 2013
Peer Feedback Jack Kearton Waters
This blog has plenty of posts and the posts are of a good quality and this is organised well so that there isn't posts all over the place.
Your front cover could have an issue number on it to make it more conventional also the groups of articles in the banner could have been at the bottom as a footer which would have been more conventional although some magazines do this. The exclusive interview story could have a description that is shorter so that you could fit more articles on the cover.The masthead also goes over part of the model's head.However overall the front cover is good and I think the text at the top is interesting.
Peer feedback: Oliver Wright
I like the blog overall because there are lots of posts so you have obviously put a lot of thought into it.
I think that you should spread your stories out across the page a bit more because it looks a bit confusing with them all along the bottom of the page. The image on the cover is good and the spiders web on your models eye fits the genre.
I think that you should spread your stories out across the page a bit more because it looks a bit confusing with them all along the bottom of the page. The image on the cover is good and the spiders web on your models eye fits the genre.
Blogger Feedback: Isabel
The blog is a good blog and it's full of posts.
The post about hair/make up/ props and costume post is great as you have used lots of pictures and written a fair bit. I also think that the image taken for you front cover is a good image.
To change the blog I would do some more research into magazines the same as yours and pick out things you like in the front covers and talk about them. Also you could do a brief analysis on your front cover and just talk about why you chose which font, which colour etc.
The front cover could change by adding more to it. Maybe a plug?
The post about hair/make up/ props and costume post is great as you have used lots of pictures and written a fair bit. I also think that the image taken for you front cover is a good image.
To change the blog I would do some more research into magazines the same as yours and pick out things you like in the front covers and talk about them. Also you could do a brief analysis on your front cover and just talk about why you chose which font, which colour etc.
The front cover could change by adding more to it. Maybe a plug?
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