Peer Feedback Jack Kearton Waters

This blog has plenty of posts and the posts are of a good quality and this is organised well so that there isn't posts all over the place.

Your front cover could have an issue number on it to make it more conventional also the groups of articles in the banner could have been at the bottom as a footer which would have been more conventional although some magazines do this. The exclusive interview story could have a description that is shorter so that you could fit more articles on the cover.The masthead also goes over part of the model's head.However overall the front cover is good and I think the text at the top is interesting.