Tuesday, 8 January 2013

Peer Feed Back: Sarah Vause

Overall assessment of blog: Over all I think your blog is up to date very well set out and organised. I also love the work you did for your ideas for the make up, costumes etc. And you have showed your development process of your magazine which is great.

Strengths of front cover: I like your main image you have used on you're front cover and the font used on the mast head. I like the box layout across the front of the main image. And you have followed basic conventions making your magazine seem realistic.

Areas for development and improvement: I like the colour scheme you have gone for however I think that the background colour doesn't work well with the colour of the masthead/features as the features don't stand out as much as they should. Try adding a box around certain features to highlight them making them seem of high importance to your audience.

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